Where I am with my project

For my final project, I will be discussing the life lesson of choosing the right people to surround yourself with and who to let influence your life. Something that I am doing well is using examples that I have gone through. Using life examples can allow people to relate easier especially with a topic like this. Everything I say holds meaning and is the truth. I repeat many lessons that my parents have taught me and lessons that I have taught myself through experiences. This is something that has affected me and changed who I am so I am passionate about what I'm saying. Something that I need to work on is making the sentences sound less similar. A lot of my sentences kind of go together and I need to add more variety in my style of sentences. I am close to finished with my project but my conclusion needs to be improved. It ends a little short and doesn't have much meaning to it. My project holds a lot of meaning and I feel like my conclusion just doesn't do it justice. Once I figure out my conclusion my project will be finished.